Rough for page Fourteen

Rough for page Fourteen

We finally reached it! This is the last page of Chapter One! Above I’ve also included the original rough draft of the page. This one stuck to the original plan, accept for changing the pacing of the wording. I look forward to hearing what your thoughts on the first chapter are.

Here’s a teaser of what the style of the next chapter will be like. These are a few character test sheets I created:

Character sheet 1

Chapter two character sheet 1

I decided to slim down the main character for chapter two, then resolve the neck line:

Character test sheet #2 for chapter two

Character test sheet #2 for chapter two

What are your thoughts on Chapter One?